Well, I just checked my handy copy of the "new music" (sorry, just the liturgy portion) that I happen to have and it does say "man", however I don't have the final format, yet. However, if you look at the Matins text on
http://metropolitancantorinstitute.org , the Great Doxology has been chaged to "Glory to God in the highest, and to people on earth, peace and good will", from "Glory to God in the highest, and on earth, peace; good will among men"
You can find all kinds of "horizonal" incluse language in the Vespers and Matins material on that site, you almost choke on the words when you stumble upon them.
Sine Nomine